I wonder if the people that reply here are even artists themselves. I think it's a fine realism piece, but yes the mouth does look a bit off, realism is hard with pencil and paper, to do it in a tattoo is commendable I believe. You receive a 7
This is a nice idea, a little more original than those nautical stars, though the start on your...right shoulder looks funny, is it the angle? I really like the notes, their an original touch honestly.