i really like it. To be honest i never even looked at the rest of the tattoo - meaning the hands u were worried about - just because the words you chose "until we meet again" are so thoughtful that it grabbed my attention. Like it alot
i really like it and the wording is great - i agree the papa is bright but this tattoo is all about him so why not make it the first thing you see. The personal touch of ur handwriting is a nice idea