Sweet Jesus!!! Nice lettering, size, and placement. I wish the flow and subtleties of the capital and flourishes were carried into the lowercase characters, but I'm a picky bastard. Either way it all comes together as a great piece.
The lettering is OK but the fill really makes the whole thing come together. I like it overall. I'm glad for you that you didn't go with Old English font, all-caps. Way to be original.
I think it's good but would have been a little more finished if the letters were connected. It looks like they were typed out on a computer without regard for letter spacing. But mad props for location and size!