lol @ lips
here are my observations
1) the lips were sliced up with a razor or something
2) her hair is jet black with white streaks
3) on the right side of her face she has a cancerous lump that needs to be excised
Keep practicing though
The sword is out of perspective somehow. It's like it's getting bigger as it goes from hilt to tip, but not only bigger, it's also kind of bending away from the viewer. Kanji is overdone and you're going to regret it. Nice blossoms and vertex though.
