Yea it's bad dude. This is YOUR skin wtf. Why would you go cheap...on YOUR skin. Pay an artist to capture your concept on the most important canvas there is...your skin. Good concept...bad art.
Wow I did not realize you were the artist! DUUUUUDE....PLEASE Stop...please! You have to stop tattooing people now. I live in MI; I almost want to find where you work and talk you down and away from the needle. Not even being mean... seriously STOP