This was my second. I had been working on it in my head for about a year then finally the artist helped piece together what was missing and here you go.
all in all, i think it's got potential. The planets look awesome, I think you should go to a new artist to get the rip redone and shaded. But overall I like it.
It looks kind of like it was done by two different artists. The planets are beautiful, but the rips could use some help. This will be flawless after some work! I'll give you a 6 cuz there is potential.