Nice Idea, Good placement, with a little touchup on the stars and lettering this could be badass. Maybe you were going for the naive artist look. Either way I like it but im pretty sure a piece of shit wrapped in a ribbon would look good on ur body;)
the "straitness" of the lettering is going to make that tattoo look horrible no matter what, looks like the lettering was printed out on microsoft word and just stamped on you.....sorry, should of done your homework before jumping into a tattoo that size