Nice work, good lines, clean and good shading....but I have to say...."your tattoo is gayer then aids" is probably the most ignorant comment I have ever seen. ( yes the Tattoo was the suckiest EVER) but dude that comment reflects on you're own ignorance.
a bullet?? in the middle or no? i think so far so doog the lines and flows look great keep me posted when you get the rest done. whats the banner going to say