...(cont.) anyway, in the 1st one, the upper-right part of it looks strange. the 2nd is fine. and the vertical lines in the 3rd confuse me. why are there dots? it looks like "ij" that's just me being picky. don't mean to offend you.
well i don't know what yours says exactly. i've studied japanese calligraphy and it's all about brush strokes. each stroke has an order. like knowing the english alphabet but not being able to read words, ya know? haha, that's confusing...