ummmm.... well im thinkin that you need to do somthin with this one... it looks really badly done and i have not idea what it is...maybe some color would help it out..
Cute idea.
If it's for your daughters, I would have went with your own original idea!
Unfortunately, since it's so small in detail - it's probably going to be a big black blob years to come.
I'd get it touched up with some color sometime soon.