I wanted a patriotic tribal and this is what the artist and I came up with. This was the first pass but I will go back and have him darken up some the shading a bit. I may try to expand it over the shoulder a bit. Thoughts?
OK, wow dude. This is very poorly done. The linework is incredibly shaky, and the saturation in the fills will need 3 more passes if you keep going back to this guy. The shading?? man, is real choppy. It is overall poor and you should find another artist.