I agree with Zoe, everything around the head looks great, really draws the eye but the whole head kinda looks blurry or dim. Nothing a nice retouch couldn't fix. Very nice design tho...great choice.
It's very pretty but I think that the face and hair are too delicate compared to the rest. The wings and hands stand out and the rest gets kinda lost. I think if it was all done the same it would look lovely. :)